Confidential brandBaby Products8 mo

Writing for the grandmother, not the mother

Gift-flagged orders 6% → 29%

Half the category's volume is bought by people who will never use the product — grandparents, aunts, colleagues. Every word on the brand's listings was addressed to the parent.

Writing for the grandmother, not the mother

At a glance

Category
Baby Products
Marketplaces
US, UK
Revenue at start
$219k / month
Audience assumption
All copy addressed to the parent
Engagement
Creative & content + DSP
Timeframe
8 months

Results

Gift-flagged orders+23 pts6% 29%
Monthly revenue+70%$219k $372k
Average order value+42%$38 $54
Return rate-3 pts11% 8%

The challenge

A gift buyer is a completely different shopper. They do not know the baby's weight, they have no opinion about materials, they are anxious about choosing something the parents will not quietly return, and they are far less price-sensitive than the parent — because the purchase is an expression of affection rather than a household expense.

The brand's listings were written for none of that. They led with technical specification and value-per-unit arguments, which is exactly right for a parent restocking and exactly wrong for an aunt who wants to be confident she has chosen well. The result was visible in the numbers: gift-flagged orders sat at 6% in a category where gifting drives a large share of volume, and average order value was stuck at the price of a single practical item.

Our approach

We built a second argument for the second buyer, without weakening the first.

  • Gift-shaped merchandising — a set of ASINs positioned as complete, presentable gifts at $45, $70 and $120, rather than as individual components.
  • Copy that reassures a non-expert — why this is a safe choice, what the parents will actually use it for, what they almost certainly do not already have.
  • Unboxing-first imagery on the gift ASINs, since the moment being bought is the handover, not the usage.
  • DSP audiences built around gifting behavior — shoppers browsing baby categories who have never bought for an infant themselves, reached ahead of shower and birth seasons.

Inside the ad account

Anonymized account view, rebuilt from the figures reported above: ad sales climbing as the gift-buyer copy and DSP audiences took hold.

Anonymized account view, rebuilt from the figures reported above: ad sales climbing as the gift-buyer copy and DSP audiences took hold.

The results

Gift-flagged orders rose from 6% to 29%, revenue grew 70% and average order value rose 42% to $54.

The order value increase is the point: the same catalog, presented as a gift someone will be seen giving, supports a price a parent buying a replacement would not accept. Returns also fell three points, which was unexpected until we read the reasons — the old returns were largely gift buyers who had guessed wrong at what the parents needed, and the new copy tells them plainly what a product is for.

“Our best copy was written for a sleep-deprived mother comparing specifications. It was being read by her mother-in-law.”
Brand Director, Baby products brand

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