Confidential brandJanitorial & Sanitation9 mo

Turning away the wrong customer on purpose

Rating 3.6 → 4.0

A commercial cleaning brand was being bought by households who found the products far too strong and said so in writing. We rewrote the listings to discourage them, lost conversion, and gained a business.

Turning away the wrong customer on purpose

At a glance

Category
Janitorial & Sanitation
Marketplaces
US
Revenue at start
$121k / month
Problem
38% of orders from households the product is not made for
Engagement
Listing SEO + account management
Timeframe
9 months

Results

Rating, hero ASIN+0.43.6 4.0
Monthly revenue+34%$121k $162k
Conversion rate-24%9.7% 7.4%
Repeat order share+42 pts19% 61%

The challenge

The catalog is professional dilutable concentrate: strong, unscented, sold in volumes a facility gets through in a month and a household would take nine years to finish. Roughly four in ten orders were coming from households who had found it through generic cleaning searches, bought it at a price that looked like a bargain per gallon, and were then genuinely unhappy — the smell, the strength, the size of the container, the fact that it must be diluted at all.

Those customers never reordered and almost always reviewed. The hero ASIN sat at 3.6 on a body of one- and two-star reviews that were, in their own terms, entirely fair. The rating then did the rest of the damage: facility buyers evaluating a chemical supplier read 3.6 as a quality signal and went elsewhere, so the wrong customer was actively driving away the right one.

Our approach

We stopped trying to convert everyone and started filtering at the top.

  • Deterrent copy by design — the first bullet and the second image state that this is a commercial concentrate requiring dilution, in the plainest possible terms.
  • Search presence pulled back from domestic terms, with household cleaning keywords negated across the account rather than harvested.
  • Volume and dilution shown as the scale they are — a jug beside a mop bucket, not beside a kitchen counter.
  • Professional context everywhere — dilution ratios, contact times and surface use written for someone doing this as a job.

Inside the ad account

Anonymized account view, rebuilt from the figures reported above: ad sales growing from $54k to $103k a month while ACoS falls from 33% to 22% across the 9-month engagement.

Anonymized account view, rebuilt from the figures reported above: ad sales growing from $54k to $103k a month while ACoS falls from 33% to 22% across the 9-month engagement.

The results

The hero ASIN's rating climbed from 3.6 to 4.0 over nine months as the reviews started coming from the people the product is built for.

Conversion rate fell 24%, exactly as intended — a large share of the clicks that used to convert should never have. Revenue still grew 34%, because facility buyers converted far more often once the rating and the copy told them this was a serious product, and because repeat orders went from a fifth of the business to nearly two thirds. A household buys once and complains; a facility buys every six weeks.

“Every one of those bad reviews was correct. We had been selling a five-gallon drum of concentrate to people with a kitchen.”
Operations Director, Commercial cleaning brand

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